neanderpaul wrote:Which part is the girl part HJ? Thanks
Paul,
If I recall the line correctly, in the chorus.....
..."that girl is only gonna break your heart"
In recent years, I have come to appreciate good covers whereby the singer \ arranger evoked "poetic licence to fit the aesthetics of his\her own arrangement.
My son has recently pointed out that sometimes, in live performance, I am guilty of singing harmony parts that seem inappropriate for the lead vocalist. This obviously makes it awkward for anyone attempting backup vocals! I have come to realize that the reason I have been guilty of this, is simply a "knee-jerk reaction to lack of faith in the other singer, OR an unreasonable feeling that the musical element MUST be included in the song, which usually has the effect of screwing up the performance!
Regarding your arrangement, I feel that the second vocal part seems awkward being sung by the lead . Since you are obviously "backing yourself up", it occurred to me that, since you already have a free guitar in your hands, you could PLAY the back up melody line and the whole thing might "flow" better.
Just a matter of opinion on my part.
I still very much like what you do with the song for the most part.
Howlin