jookeyman wrote:Between gigs and rehearsals and visiting the old folks Mark and I threw together a cute little ditty I have posted here - https://soundcloud.com/jookeyman/paris-swing42-beta-test
Mark threw me a nice meaty bone of a Gypsy Jazz track, arranging a really cool piece. I then did a classical treatment on it w/ 2 guitars and a bass so this is a neo-classical/jazz hybrid #. All of my parts are improvised and not written out (therefore you get the beta version). I didn't get all of the harmonies and counterpoint exactly where I wanted but what the hell, we don't ever talk about music so who cares. 
Thanks to Mark for sharing his talents!!
you're most welcome. and thank YOU for putting in time, thought, and your talent to mess w it!
as far as me "arranging" anything.....my only contribution was to strum some chords on my Paris Swing GC-42 gtr!
i know that after you jumped me for my last comments (critique) of one of your tunes, i promised not to weigh in again w any criticisms...constructive or otherwise, but i can't help myself. i yam what i yam and gotta be me....an outspoken yahoo!
ok, here goes...you've got some cool things going on there. i love how the bass line moves both down and then up. nice. and some of the gtr melodies are very cool even though they don't always "make the changes". but for MY tastes...and this is highly subjective stuff here....it's a little too congested for me.
and for my money (of which i've spent none) i think perhaps it might flow a little better w some more space, as my rhythm gtr does have a good amount of chord changes and movement.
there's my (unsolicited) two cents. i'll await hearing from your attorney!