Lemme see if I can do this with the best of intentions...
Every song but one of those in your listing was in the same key (C#). Was that intentional? I would experiment with other keys (they have different energies).
The lyrics and music, while heavy and tight, didn't strike me as particularly inspired. See I think we are beyond being particularly impressed with volume and distortion by now - those bounds have been pretty much breached. What impresses me is a clarity and originality of sound, a cleverness and truth in lyrics. Something that makes the piece stand out, that you would go the extra mile to slap it on a CD or iPod. What I heard was some guys having fun making big noise - which is not such a bad thing in and of itself, but when it comes to making a larger impression on the world, I'd say probably not.
My suggestion. Tune all your instruments to a different key. Commit to writing songs only about...say.....old buildings in a five mile radius. See what happens.
Every song but one of those in your listing was in the same key (C#). Was that intentional? I would experiment with other keys (they have different energies).
The lyrics and music, while heavy and tight, didn't strike me as particularly inspired. See I think we are beyond being particularly impressed with volume and distortion by now - those bounds have been pretty much breached. What impresses me is a clarity and originality of sound, a cleverness and truth in lyrics. Something that makes the piece stand out, that you would go the extra mile to slap it on a CD or iPod. What I heard was some guys having fun making big noise - which is not such a bad thing in and of itself, but when it comes to making a larger impression on the world, I'd say probably not.
My suggestion. Tune all your instruments to a different key. Commit to writing songs only about...say.....old buildings in a five mile radius. See what happens.