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#86456 by gbheil
Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:01 pm
He should have had four kids like me.

Then the song could go.

Get the hell out....... your time.. is up.....
Take out the garbage on your way.......


But honestly, that is one of those feelings so...... I dont have words.
Glad to see your children grow to be strong and independant ..... but yet I have missed soooo much. It's confusing.

#86458 by neanderpaul
Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:07 pm
I think he does have 4. 2 older and 2 younger I believe. Mine are still so innocent that I'm still in a blind awe.

#86478 by 1collaborator
Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:48 am
Mine grew up so fast they were out on there on before I realized. My youngest turned 26 in july and I'm waiting for my second grandson to arrive around the first of 2010. I try to spend as much time with my 10 year old grandson cause I know it wont be long before he's a grown man with little time for me. Sounds like your a hell of a dad. Ther are too many dads out there that dont care if their own even has enough to survive, or are too busy to even call and wish them a happy b-day. In fact next time I see Gabes dad I'm going to kick his ass for being like that. But so is life. I try to take care of mine and those around me and thats all I can do. I'm just glad theres others with the same kind of love in em still out there. I hope to shake your hand one day.


And it is another day in Paradise !!!

#86479 by gbheil
Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:54 am
From one father to another.
Hold on to that image in your heart Paul.
There will be times in your life as a father, when that is all that will get you through.

#86487 by neanderpaul
Tue Oct 13, 2009 1:49 am
Thanks for the wisdom George. I will follow it.

# 1, if that handshake is extended to me I will take it! :D

#86535 by CraigMaxim
Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:59 pm
sanshouheil wrote:From one father to another.
Hold on to that image in your heart Paul.
There will be times in your life as a father, when that is all that will get you through.



Why couldn't that be the song you're looking for Sans?



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#86563 by gbheil
Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:02 pm
I think Eric beat me to it.


Oh Sweet
Lyrics by Eric Davis
Melody by Ray Jackson
Music by Noisy Kung Fu


I used to slip in and watch you sleeping
Counting every tiny breath you made
So afraid that they might stop
Knowing my life would end, for your leaving

[Pre-chorus]
Oh, sweet souls of my love
No matter where you go, no matter what you do
I will always be that part of you!

[Chorus]
Oh, sweet souls of my love
Smiling child in my hand, trying hard to stand
To prove who you are... to prove what you can!!!
Oh, sweet souls of my love...

Please don't take it too seriously
Yet take it to your fullest...forgive the foolish
And right the wrong, if you can
'Cause it takes only one voice

(Pre-chorus)
(Chorus x2)

Oh, sweet souls of my love
I will always be there!
I will always be there!
Sweet, sweet souls of my love!
Oh, sweet souls of my love!
Oh, sweet souls of my love...

#86565 by philbymon
Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:17 pm
I've tried several times in my lifetime to write a song for my son. Ever since I was a teen, myself. I found that I had no wisdom to give him...hell...I still don't!

This is a good song, for sure.

#86620 by 1collaborator
Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:16 pm
Sans when I get going like that I find it real hard to stop. Sounds like you got it going on!

Its another day in Paradise !!!

#86665 by gbheil
Wed Oct 14, 2009 11:47 pm
Eric wrote this as a poem. I believe he said he wrote it back in the 70s.
It's a pretty song. I enjoy playing it.

#86695 by CraigMaxim
Thu Oct 15, 2009 5:47 am
Eric didn't beat you to it.

I was not speaking of a generic song about a father and son, but a song built around that particular line you shared. The idea that those precious memories of them as children will sometimes be the thing that gets you through parenthood, when more troubling days come in their lives, or maybe when they rebel and don't want to speak to you for 6 months, etc...

That is, if I understood you correctly? But that's the way I took it.

That would make for a great song, of understanding and love between parent and child. There are plenty of generic songs about how precious a baby is, or worrying that they will grow up healthy and secure or whatever.

But the image that came into my mind from your words, was some rift or argument ensuing between a father and his son, and maybe the son is spewing angry words at his dad, but the father, even though looking at a grown son, or nearly grown son, keeps seeing the little boy who was frustrated because he couldn't hit a baseball after several tries, and the father keeps encouraging him, and he finally gets that good swing and is so happy when he hits the ball for the first time, or the father sees an image of his son curled up asleep and remembers how he would pull the blanket back up and over him while he slept.

In other words:

"Son, you're looking at me in anger, like an enemy of yours right now, but when I look back at you, I see that precious boy who picked wild flowers and brought them to his mother, that boy who cuddled up beside me when the movie got to the scary part, that same little boy I worked so hard to provide for and to protect."

Parents endure alot from kids, out of love. The idea of holding onto the cute or touching memories, for when their lives get more complex or frustrating, or maybe they are making huge mistakes which a parent knows can only end badly, and a parent can do little but pray and hope for the best.... that is moving, and a great theme for a touching song... a look into a parent's heart, and the sacrifices made and the heartaches that inevitably come here and there.

It's not easy to hold that much anger for someone, when you think of how cute and innocent and fragile they were at one time, and they only had you to depend on as they faced a great big world while they grew up.

How many new parents think "Now I understand what my parents went through with me."

Maybe a song like that would help them understand a parental heart BEFORE they end up learning by becoming parents themselves?

.

#86699 by neanderpaul
Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:43 am
sanshouheil wrote:From one father to another.
Hold on to that image in your heart Paul.
There will be times in your life as a father, when that is all that will get you through.


I was thinking what Craig was. That's a song waiting to happen!

So back to the topic. How about Mike's guitar work and lyrics!!?

#86700 by gbheil
Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:51 am
Mikes guitar work was what I could appreciate most I think. The lyrical cntent is awsome but I found myself distracted by his vocals.

And Craig, you and Paul need to get out of my head man.
I could not have described the scenario any better myself.

There were circumstances as well with Eric's poem that made it more than gereic. But of course there would be no way for the reader / listener to ,know that.

So I write. For the first time not spontainiousy.

Wish me luck.

#86703 by neanderpaul
Thu Oct 15, 2009 12:02 pm
Go Sans!

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