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Ok so as much as women hate to hear the ugly truth (you know its true ladies!), I would love it if somebody gave me some feedback on my cover of "Valerie" its in the audio section on my profile
just dont be too harsh hehe

Miggie Lou

Hi Miggie:

A few random thoughts from the RNAH.

( + ) I like your voice. I like the dynamics with which you sang this song.
Well produced. Posative lyrical content is always a + in my book.

( - ) Many of the Bandmixaleros do short visits here due to busy schedules of music the dreaded day jobs and family obligations.
Convert to MP3 please so I dont have to wait for a download to hear your beautifull voice.

Some thing just unsetteling about a lovely female voice singing about another female. Yea I know Val could be a guy, thats just not the impression I got from the song.
Yes, I am politically incorrect and thats just my take on it.


Thanks for posting and welcome to the Mix.
Now put on your seatbelt lady, you will get the unvarnished oppinions on this forum.

Hi Miggie.
I see you took it off? Sorry about that the Forum at present has "Other" things on its mind.

Have you got a MySpace account?

Keep well.

Chippy.

Miggie please post as George said in mp3 format. There are a lot of free downloads, I personally dont have time to download a song and listen.

Welcome and Good Luck in your musical endeavers.

Hey it took like 12 seconds to download

So Miggie, here's my take, and my apologies in advance, I'm a bit direct and don't bs...

The recording is nice, sounds clean and crisp. Your vocals are good. I didn't hear anything off pitch or "undesirable". I actually liked the way you inserted that broken-note style throughout the song. It was very tactful and smart.

But here's the thing. I can't find a bad thing to say about the song on any technical level, but yet, it's missing something, yes indeed.

We call it the "IT factor". We all know what it is, and most of us in life will only write a handful of songs that capture it. Your song just doesn't. It's close, but with "IT".. it either hits the mark or it doesn't, and your song doesn't.

Now.. that being said...

You are about as close as one gets. Focus more on hooks and keep the tactful writing and arrangement approaches. Hooks don't automatically = "IT", but it's a good measuring stick as any.

Good luck, I hope your group does well!

Where is it then?

Scrap that sorry I got it DOH!

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YOU GUYZ SCARED HER AWAY....

hehe wow, thanks for the responses fellas! I would just like to note I didnt write this song, its a cover of a Amy Winehouse song called "Valerie" off of her FRANK album, hehe

Thanks for the adivce, its much appreciated !!

Miggie Lou

Get the MP3 Download Miggie.
I'll delete it later if I remember ok.

Get some backing stuff going, it's really the only thing missing, great voice.

Hey Chippy!!!! Thank you so much for the MP3!!! Ive been trying to convert the song to an mp3 with no sucesse so thank you again!! Im not worried about you deleting it lol


Miggie Lou

No worries.
Glad you can get it.

Hey Chippy!!!! Thank you so much for the MP3!!! Ive been trying to convert the song to an mp3 with no sucesse so thank you again!! Im not worried about you deleting it lol


Miggie Lou

Hi Miggie,

I checked out an Amy Winehouse version on youtube 'cause I hadn't heard the song.

I think you have a better voice. The only thing that gets me is, I think you used a little too much of the broken phonetic style. It's something that should be done sparingly. My advice would be to smooth out some of the words where they're broken up. Not all, but a little less.

Other than that, it sounds awesome, you do have a great voice. Do you have a vocal coach?

*cough* (feathers fly out of mouth) lol