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sanshouheil wrote:I did !
Awsome Mary, simply beautifull.
Fit like a glove with the gourgous fall like morning I am enjoying here today.
You ROCK my lady !!
ColorsFade wrote:I liked it. I thought the production was great. It sounded way better than I anticipated. I really liked the melodies, the use of the strings and the harp; and the flute playing was fabulous. The main melody you've come up with is great. Reminiscent of Enya without feeling like a copycat.
My critique would be: it was too long. And this is coming from a guy who *loves* long pieces. I'm a Dream Theater fan; love the 12-minute "Learning to Live", love the 44-minute epic "Six Degrees of Inner Turbulence", love the 19-minute epic of the latest album, "The Count of Tuscany". I love length.
But it's got to feel like it goes somewhere, if it's going to be long. It can't feel repetitive.
If it were me, I would have shortened the song. At the 4:00 mark when you cut loose for a bit, I would have had that happen a lot sooner, around the 2:00 mark, shooting for a 4:00 piece. The 5:00 mark sounds like the song is ending, but it's not... Goes on for another minute.
The melodies are great. But it just feels like too much of them for too long.
Black57 wrote::roll: Well, not really but I figured it would get you guys over here in a hurry. Bandmix uploaded my final take of Coffee Break. I want you all to hear it and if you have the time listen to both versions...if not, listen to Coffee Break take 9.
Sorry for the decpetion.Bwahahaha
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