Wow, Debbie. We got a lot of opinions on this thread didn't we. To tell the truth, I was just looking at it as you having fun and testing yourself on your ability to write songs for other people based on the title. There's no right or wrong here. Like I said, I'd probably never use this song anyway as it's not my style, even the way I was looking at it as being written. You may be able to run with it and come up with a song that may sell to a country artist, but I don't think they'd go for the abrupt suicide angle. I wasn't looking at you writing the song FOR me as much as just to show that you could. And I've seen from your other songs that you are a good writer. Whatever you write is yours to do with as you want. If it made a million dollars for you, I wouldn't feel entitled to a red cent for just coming up with a title.
As far as writing about suicide, I had a song on here called "Nevermore" a while back. It was about a guy having an acid flashback nightmare. Then the last verse everything was fine...and then it started all over and he couldn't take it. One of the lines was, "My razor is laughing, my wrists are both crying, their tears are a river 'cross my bathroom floor." I wasn't writing that from personal experience, it just came with the song. But when my friends heard it and read the lyrics, they were like, "Jeff, is there something you need to talk about?"

I told them, "No, it's all purely fictional."