General Music Chat

Sup people. I just uploaded new songs on my profile though some are old.. Kinda looking for new opinions or perhaps even ideas to make them better.. They are some parts that i had to play the Vocal Melody with Guitar because i dont have the tools to record decent Vocals on them.. Anyways .. Hope you'll like them.

http://www.bandmix.com/amin/

Kinda hard to tell how good a song is without the singer & lyrics, but okay...


"Forever Cold" - starts off kinda mechanical, but I like it so far...it takes too long to get to the 2nd movement at around 3:30, & prolly needs to be trimmed down...over 5 min is usually too long, generally speaking

"Wounds..." - you seem to have an art rock approach that I find appealing...again it's hard to tell without the vox...again, too long to start the changes at 4:20-something, & too long overall

That's all I have time for right now...I'll check in later for more

I agree with Philby. AS I'm listening I'm waiting for something dramatic to happen, perhaps at 1:00, 2:00, etc. These tunes are obviously in the formative stages. They are in no way complete, however what's here is good. You need to throw some drama into them. They sound like they"re building to something...just now complete them.

Spooky and untypical... I like both of those things...
Nice Work Amin!

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