philbymon wrote:One of mine own -
"Her eyes aren't really blue.
They're more like prisms breaking light
Into a myriad of hues.
I used to dream in black & white
But now I dream in colors I can't even describe,
'Cause lately when I'm sleeping I go swimming
In her crystal eyes."
Yeah, I actually managed to use the word "myriad" in a song. I have no idea why, but that's the way it got written.
That's really good. I like that.
Since we're posting our own stuff now, I'll post some of mine:
"You're not the knife that cuts deep in fresh wounds
You're not the parasite that steals her life's blood
You're not the blade that's been worn down and used
You're not to blame, you're not to blame"
This is from a demo whose acoustic version my band's going to be posting this Saturday.