General Music Chat

I finally wrote and recorded words for the song previously known as "Agua Cerveza"; it's now called "Poison" on my player. I got inspired to write the lyrics after my gf got bit by a spider and ended up in the hospital for 5 days. These are just scratch vocals; hopefully Neanderpaul will do his magic.

Poison

Black widow spider kissed me, baby
Poison went into my vein
Love has made me sick and crazy
Life is going down the drain

Getting hard to see things clearly
Blood is pounding in my brain
Thoughts are twisted up so queerly
Lies are driving me insane

You’re like poison in my body
Makes my heart as black as coal
You’re a toxin in my bloodstream
You’re like poison in my soul

I hear the sound of a cobra hissing
Fangs of the viper pierce my skin
I feel the venom burn my body
As my head begins to spin

I try to run but find I can’t move
As I’m paralyzed with fear
Body shakes and hands are trembling
Please God get me out of here

Poison…
Poison…

Lead

Black widow spider kissed me, baby
Poison went into my vein
Love has made me sick and crazy
Life is going down the drain

Getting hard to see things clearly
Blood is pounding in my brain
Thoughts are twisted up so queerly
Lies are driving me insane

You’re like poison in my body
Makes my heart as black as coal
You’re a toxin in my bloodstream
You’re like poison in my soul

You’re like poison in my body
Makes my heart as black as coal
You’re a toxin in my bloodstream
You’re like poison in my soul

Poison…
Poison…

Kinda a heavy Alice Cooperish tune. I like. Looking foreward to the end product. Rockin as always Jimmy.

Thanks Sans. I'm sure after Neanderpaul is finished it will be much different but I just wanted to get the ball rolling. BTW, Cooper is exactly what I heard too!

I hate spiders!!!

Make it about a woman not a spider, not that much difference really. Edit: Oh my bad, I guess it is. It mostly works for me, I dont know about the spider thing. Ac/dc did something like a black widow song, cant remember.

bwahahahaaa@Stillkicken