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#222335 by GuitarMikeB
Tue Sep 17, 2013 12:12 pm
I'm at work so can't check out your demo, but you should include 'hidden' contact information on your profile - only premium members can message you here, most people who browse the profiles are not paying members.
Last edited by GuitarMikeB on Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.

#222341 by jimmydanger
Tue Sep 17, 2013 1:45 pm
Lindsay, first off you should not cover a cover if you can help it. It's a Cure song, not an Adele song. Go listen to the original track and then try to sing it like you, not Adele. I would like to her your voice on a more upbeat song, that song's too much of a downer and really doesn't highlight your vocals. Best of luck.

#222353 by gbheil
Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:10 pm
Welcome.

I like your voice, but I don't feel this demo is doing you any justice.

I don't feel as I hear emotion, just you, singing a cover.

The recorded mix is killing you.

The vox are way too far out front IMO.

And the result sounds like your trying to restrain your voice to fit the backing track.

I feel you can, and should, produce a much better demo.

Something that displays your talent.


Best wishes.

#222354 by GuitarMikeB
Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:38 pm
lindsaylyne wrote:Thanks! Anyone who can't post shoot me an email to lindsaylyne@hotmail.comvand let me know your thoughts.


You need to put your email address in yoru profile - and hide it like 'lindsay AT hotmail DOT com' - unless you are a premium member, the site owners will delete unhidden contact info when they come across it.
In general, people are not coming to these forums at all to seek out others.

#222366 by Jahva
Wed Sep 18, 2013 1:33 am
I didn't really dig that too much. None of the interesting musical elements are there. It's not a lounge song. That's not on you... Adele shouldn't of done this song imo. I'd stay away from it. I did listen to her version... again no offense to you but it sucks to my ears.
I don't imagine it was much of a challenge for you either... Do your own thing.
Good luck to you.

#222374 by Jahva
Wed Sep 18, 2013 11:48 am
lindsaylyne wrote:Joined a rock band tonight. Will work on The Cure's and my own version and repost later. Thanks guys!


8)

#222377 by jimmydanger
Wed Sep 18, 2013 12:30 pm
Fantastic! You have a good attitude and I'm sure you'll do fine. Keep us posted.

#222401 by gbheil
Wed Sep 18, 2013 8:20 pm
Now that's what I'm talkin about ! 8)

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