I am glad you got some message out of that video.
I thought it was completely bereft of anything substantial, but I've been wrong before and it's no secret I dislike rap intensely.
Furthermore you can attempt to make anything well if you have enough ducats and the people that actually have the skills to produce something worthwhile.
Someone once told me that "you can't shine sh*t" and I believe that wholeheartedly. I don't know what's in his repertoire, but that one I didn't like. Hopefully if he's got more, it's better than that.
Otherwise if you suck, you suck. You want to coddle the diseased and the infirmed, hey that's great. But please do call them as you see them.
We don't all get the luxury of those rose colored glasses or people that are willing to encourage others even when we know "that horse don't trot no more".
It's a rough game and if people can't take the full monty of it all, why bolster their confidence falsely?
Do you think THAT will progress into a prospective artist?
Now what's worse; telling him that it's not ok in some form or sticking him in front of a crowd and letting him burn all the way to the deep dark bottom.
Remember these jokers hear what you say and then act upon it.
This could be the next act at your local open mic..
(Bartender, gimme 3 Long Island Ice Teas and hold the coke-a-cola and ice.)
PS: I disagree that every newbie around here gets torn down. Merely the whack ones with the worst music imaginable, they do take a feather ruffling but if it was me, I'd want to know before I made an ass out of myself in public. (been there, done that)
You want examples of new people that didn't get "the shoe to the head"?
I am thinking of one right off the bat.
"Play your music for people that know you".
What do they say about it? If they say it's awful, you might want to get another opinion. If the second person says it's awful, you might want to give it a go around again to a third. If the third person tells you it's awful, it really is.
You've heard of "read, write, review, recite". I think most have at one point or another.
Try "write, recite, perform, review, rewrite".
Nobody gets along without doing the legwork and there are no shortcuts to the golden cut and I am not talking "photography".