I had input. To go any further with it, I attempt to get feedback from those that know. My these Glasses song was said to be long. By the time I re-wrote it I had already cut the fat, chit chat and fluff. That was good feedback. Telling me it was "chitty" could be taken as good information if I was told how it was Chitty. Otherwise, it's just bullchit. Positve is not always good. Sometimes less is more. Putting money into a Dead Horse can only be used to bury it or make sandwiches.
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