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#197674 by PaperDog
Thu Dec 13, 2012 6:27 am
Dizzizz wrote:
OfficialShazStar wrote:Artist:

No money man, not yet. Let my big break come first then we'll see. Got any tips for my music though? Like stuff I can work on.


I checked out your Miss America video. First, I almost shut it off right at the beginning... I thought your voice was going to be badly pitch-shifted all the way through. That was pretty awful. Once it started, the first thing I noticed was you sound out-of-breath and uncomfortable most of the time. Is that just how your voice is? It's kind of uncomfortable to listen to.

Also, fire your PR person. Spamming the hell out of a musician's forum isn't going to make you any friends. It's bad forum etiquette anywhere, and, as you've probably noticed, gets you written off right off the bat.


I agree with Dizz. You're sounding all puffed up...Way uncomfortable trying to be ghetto, and clearly you aren't. Your vocal ain't convincing.
Be for real and lose the "posing as a bad-ass act" .

#197686 by Starfish Scott
Thu Dec 13, 2012 12:44 pm
lol "welcome to the grinder"...

If there's anything left after you pass through, you can be reasonably sure that it's reasonable. lol

#197699 by Deadguitars
Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:02 pm
Old Man Circle Jerk in action
:lol:
Hey Kid tell these Old Phucks to go screw themselves

#197700 by GuitarMikeB
Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:28 pm
Hey 'Deadguitars' - what did one DeadHead say to the other DeadHead when the drugs ran out?
:wink:
:shock:
:wink:
:lol:
"Man, this music sucks!" :P

#197701 by Deadguitars
Thu Dec 13, 2012 4:32 pm
GuitarMikeB wrote:Hey 'Deadguitars' - what did one DeadHead say to the other DeadHead when the drugs ran out?
:wink:
:shock:
:wink:
:lol:
"Man, this music sucks!" :P

8)
Thats a classic it never gets old ....
Mike .... what is so great about this forum filled with SOME people who take them selves so seriously ?
Build something up dont tear something down

#197704 by Planetguy
Thu Dec 13, 2012 5:41 pm
apology accepted.

ok, i checked the video. not bad....i'm not a fan of that style of music so i can't offer much in the way of critique or suggestions.

i didn't hear you so much "out of breath" as i did hear "Deaf speech".

are you Deaf or hearing impaired? i'm not asking that because your pitch was off (hell, your pitch is a lot better than most rappers i've heard) but as a genuine question. and i also noticed when you flash your numbers you do them ASL style w your palm facing yourself.

at one point when you do the "mic check" bit ("mic check 1-2-3-4") i was waiting to see if you used thumb, index, and middle fingers to sign "three" but the camera panned away at that point.

#197710 by Starfish Scott
Thu Dec 13, 2012 6:25 pm
Oh gawd the blood is flying.. lol

(Gee I can't wait for the beating I will get on my next one here coming "looking at watch/listening for the tick" should have been here already..)

#197717 by PaperDog
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:09 pm
Deadguitars wrote:Old Man Circle Jerk in action
:lol:
Hey Kid tell these Old Phucks to go screw themselves


Hey there youngster, Do Let us know what year you think you'll be breaking out your big hit release. What's that?...The Mayans don't have you scheduled for one?

As for your Circle Jerk comment? Seems to me you just gladly walked right into the middle of this one. Need a towel, Beeyotch?

Before you go pointing your hook-ass stubby finger at us adults, maybe you oughtta just shut the fuk up, junior, and learn a thing or two... Start by teaching yourself how to read. Then go back and try to gleen the sage wisdom that us old mother f**k are casting. Mr Shiznit over here, is getting a solid lesson... So Take a cue, little boy.

#197718 by VinnyViolin
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:29 pm
Deadguitars wrote:Old Man Circle Jerk in action
:lol:
Hey Kid tell these Old Phucks to go screw themselves


Jerry Garcia wrote:Talk about your plenty, talk about your ills, One man gathers what another man spills.

#197719 by Deadguitars
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:35 pm
PaperDog wrote:
Deadguitars wrote:Old Man Circle Jerk in action
:lol:
Hey Kid tell these Old Phucks to go screw themselves


Hey there youngster, Do Let us know what year you think you'll be breaking out your big hit release. What's that?...The Mayans don't have you scheduled for one?

As for your Circle Jerk comment? Seems to me you just gladly walked right into the middle of this one. Need a towel, Beeyotch?

Before you go pointing your hook-ass stubby finger at us adults, maybe you oughtta just shut the fuk up, junior, and learn a thing or two... Start by teaching yourself how to read. Then go back and try to gleen the sage wisdom that us old mother f**k are casting. Mr Shiznit over here, is getting a solid lesson... So Take a cue, little boy.

The only advice you should be giving is what kind of Depends you buy.

8)
Hit release ?
Is that what you think you are doing ?????
(((((( herd mentality )))))))

#197722 by VinnyViolin
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:41 pm
Image

... A herd of deadheads

#197723 by PaperDog
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:42 pm
Deadguitars wrote:
PaperDog wrote:
Deadguitars wrote:Old Man Circle Jerk in action
:lol:
Hey Kid tell these Old Phucks to go screw themselves


Hey there youngster, Do Let us know what year you think you'll be breaking out your big hit release. What's that?...The Mayans don't have you scheduled for one?

As for your Circle Jerk comment? Seems to me you just gladly walked right into the middle of this one. Need a towel, Beeyotch?

Before you go pointing your hook-ass stubby finger at us adults, maybe you oughtta just shut the fuk up, junior, and learn a thing or two... Start by teaching yourself how to read. Then go back and try to gleen the sage wisdom that us old mother f**k are casting. Mr Shiznit over here, is getting a solid lesson... So Take a cue, little boy.

The only advice you should be giving is what kind of Depends you buy.

8)
Hit release ?
Is that what you think you are doing ?????
(((((( herd mentality )))))))


Ohh that is so rich! So funny... Depends...Bwahahahah!

Hey Dumb-ass, Jerry Garcia just called... He wants me to proxy in his middle finger at you. (He also asked me to tell you to stop killing cats when you play his songs)

#197724 by Deadguitars
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:45 pm
Hey Vinny you will need this to join the circle jerk

Image

8)

Bring it

#197725 by VinnyViolin
Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:46 pm
Deadguitars wrote:Hey Vinny you will need this to join the circle jerk

Image

8)

Bring it


"When you point a finger, there are three fingers pointing back at you"

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