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#168347 by Starfish Scott
Wed Mar 21, 2012 2:34 pm
XhaDoW-6 wrote:Personally I like this guy He put something out controversial and was fully prepared to Stand his ground behind it and back it up In an educated Manor You do that too much these days


Please punctuate a little. I like what you write, just not how you write it.

I can tell there's a brain behind the eyes. So just write short sentences.

As in ..

"Personally I like this guy.
He put something out controversial and was fully prepared to stand his ground behind it and back it up in an educated manner.
You do that too much these days."

Grammar/Punctuation is over rated, content is not.
Don't let your content suffer because of your punctuation.
It's a disservice to your good content.
Spell Checker isn't a bad idea either. I can't spell worth sh*t, but the checker can. lol

#168375 by lalong
Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:42 pm
Embarrassed about what? You saw something entirely different then what I did. I am assuming what I got from it was different then how PDog had intended as well. He may, or may not, be aware of the associations that I got. It hardly matters in either case, it is not up to me what free speech is.

But it would be a disservice if the intentions are truly the exact opposite of the alternate results and no one said why, or how. Sure an uncomfortable feeling and hate me for saying it. Better pissed at me, than waylaid from out of the blue in a larger audience. Honesty, even if a misconception, is better then a polite lie of avoidance. If I come away with anything positive from this, then maybe that was it?

#168379 by PaperDog
Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:20 pm
lalong wrote:Embarrassed about what? You saw something entirely different then what I did. I am assuming what I got from it was different then how PDog had intended as well. He may, or may not, be aware of the associations that I got. It hardly matters in either case, it is not up to me what free speech is.

But it would be a disservice if the intentions are truly the exact opposite of the alternate results and no one said why, or how. Sure an uncomfortable feeling and hate me for saying it. Better pissed at me, than waylaid from out of the blue in a larger audience. Honesty, even if a misconception, is better then a polite lie of avoidance. If I come away with anything positive from this, then maybe that was it?


No Need to be embarrassed.. You have good, valid points.. which stand on their own two feet...

The song does take on a sarcastic tone... You know, After hearing a boatload of anti-white, anti semetic, anti black, anti-Christ, anti-climax...on FM radio, , on the Comedy Central... I just think its time that folks get reminded of some truth.

I find it very interesting how all of us can bring our own reference into a completely objective expression. If you want, you can change how you 'see' the prose in the song. Its completely under our control, what we decide to see. In fact, despite any of my own prompting (in previous posts) there is a plethora of different truly viable ways to view that prose.

I'll tell ya this though, If this thing made it to the Garden, and actually caused a riot, I'd have to say its more a reflection of the society's attitudes and lack of comfort, than it is about the artist LOL!

#168380 by PaperDog
Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:21 pm
XhaDoW-6 wrote:Personally I like this guy He put something out controversial and was fully prepared to Stand his ground behind it and back it up In an educated Manor You do that too much these days


Thank you Xhadow... :)

#168418 by PaperDog
Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:14 am
Ok Ya'll ... I knew I want making this up..;. This video is primarily what inspired me to write my song. And after you see this video, please tell me where my song is 'so terribly offensive, or why it might be construed as propoganda.

Mind you... I dont hate this man in the video.. I feel sadness for him... He is angry and I'm sure its much bigger than you and I.

My song tells truth and offers viable compassion.

Its that simple. (Might even want to play it while you watch this video...I'm thinking of contacting the news agency for permission to use it in 'my' video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ob57Z6lN ... re=related

#168419 by J-HALEY
Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:49 am
PaperDog wrote:Ok Ya'll ... I knew I want making this up..;. This video is primarily what inspired me to write my song. And after you see this video, please tell me where my song is 'so terribly offensive, or why it might be construed as propoganda.

Mind you... I dont hate this man in the video.. I feel sadness for him... He is angry and I'm sure its much bigger than you and I.

My song tells truth and offers viable compassion.

Its that simple. (Might even want to play it while you watch this video...I'm thinking of contacting the news agency for permission to use it in 'my' video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ob57Z6lN ... re=related


I don't feel sorry For that PHUKIN DUMB PHUK! Having said that I once had that SAME dumb @ss ANGER! It is SOOoo easy to blame someone else for your problems!
You can let other folks CONTROL you and be a sheeple like the DUMB PHUK in the video! People educate yourself about politic's don't believe what the media tells you!

#168443 by Starfish Scott
Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:32 pm
PaperDog wrote:Ok Ya'll ... I knew I want making this up..;. This video is primarily what inspired me to write my song. And after you see this video, please tell me where my song is 'so terribly offensive, or why it might be construed as propoganda.

Mind you... I dont hate this man in the video.. I feel sadness for him... He is angry and I'm sure its much bigger than you and I.

My song tells truth and offers viable compassion.

Its that simple. (Might even want to play it while you watch this video...I'm thinking of contacting the news agency for permission to use it in 'my' video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ob57Z6lN ... re=related




Oh nooooes, that was quite an earful.

Why is he so angry at all white people?

I mean, I have been mad at individuals before but I always thought it was the height of ignorance to label a whole race as one thing or another.

There are always going to be good and bad in every race.
How do these people not know this?

Jesus is this the real effect of oppression?
Or is he just on a tear?

If you have ten fingers, ten toes, 2 eyes, a mouth, 2 ears, 2 arms, 2 legs and a head, you're human and deserving of everything anyone else is.

I wonder what kind of horrible event it will take to bring humans of the world to work together as 1 entity.

(cue battlefield LA. trailer) lol

I call the rpg !!!
#168699 by candiny
Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:47 am
I think Dawg was just righting a song about my last sentence!

Good writing , playing , and generally just getting better . http://www.christianlouboutinstovlersalget.com

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