General Music Chat

You suffer, I watch
You hurt, I see
Through the gray and murk the flowers still grow
Blue skies are there, But only I know
Time has told the keeper of the gate
Strength and trust only make you late
Be still, Be quiet
Be in this moment
Your eyes say nothing but your smile fills my ears
I feel your texture and taste your tears
My arms will wrap you in solace this day
My eyes close to see you in the month of May
Take note, Take it all
Be the flutter of wings
Be the Love of my life when the spring Robin sings

I knew you had a metal ballad in you somewhere.


Don't fight the urge ... you'll only die tired ...

What has this become??? A poetry contest forum???

In the still of the predawn ,
All the sheets were warm,
From lovers passion ,
many swarm,
and if you don't like my poetry ,
get out of my way,
before I cause some harm.

(C)2011.

sans, you are the only one that knows.
That is good.

We know you can sing, so what ??? you don't like my poetry?

Mine is more than a poem.

I liked them both, they're both beautiful.

Chaeya

If I wrote one it would probably look more like spam.

That is a great poem, Klug. Love it!

Is it me, or has there been some poetry coming into the forum lately/

If I wrote one it would probably look more like spam.

Give it to us Slacker! I know you got it in you!

The king of the worlds up on the mountain
Waiting for the sun to arise
Singing songs of the coming revolution
And praying to the stars in the sky

Dear Lord can you hear me
I need a friend here near me
I'm alone
Someone superstitous
I'm really quite suspicious of it all

The king of the world announced today
There'll be more terrorism in the USA
Where's bedclothes and never shaves
Broadcasts videos from a cave

The words are half the show
Inserted to let you know
The music conveys the theme
Anarchy in society

The king of the worlds daddy
Was his mommas favorite brothers son
So don't think he don't carry some baggage
Maybe he ain't the chosen one

Lynard Dylan 2011

LD, allow me to get out my red editor pen:

* 'to arise' is improper; 'to rise' is appropriate.

* probably just a typo but 'where's bedclothes' should be 'wears bedclothes'

These may seem like small points but could be pivotal in the right circumstances.