Dizzizz wrote:OfficialShazStar wrote:Artist:
No money man, not yet. Let my big break come first then we'll see. Got any tips for my music though? Like stuff I can work on.
I checked out your Miss America video. First, I almost shut it off right at the beginning... I thought your voice was going to be badly pitch-shifted all the way through. That was pretty awful. Once it started, the first thing I noticed was you sound out-of-breath and uncomfortable most of the time. Is that just how your voice is? It's kind of uncomfortable to listen to.
Also, fire your PR person. Spamming the hell out of a musician's forum isn't going to make you any friends. It's bad forum etiquette anywhere, and, as you've probably noticed, gets you written off right off the bat.
I agree with Dizz. You're sounding all puffed up...Way uncomfortable trying to be ghetto, and clearly you aren't. Your vocal ain't convincing.
Be for real and lose the "posing as a bad-ass act" .