General Music Chat

One of my songs is 65 on iacmusician.com
this one is more emotional I think you'd like to have it Go ahead download it http://bandmix.com/jvtuttle

I have to be honest with ya here... the millisecond delay that your gtr synth(probably a roland gr40?) is killing me. I'm not saying u r bad or anything... just that phrasing sounds a hair wrong.
the piano is nice, the bass is nice... even the rythm section is nice...

the wha gtr is nice. you might add a basic repeating melody with that same sound and pan it all left.

there is something good there in the basic "peanuts style" motif you have going... I like it. that's the part that's really working for ya.


needs to be mixed big time too.

almost forgot my discaimer...
just giving thoughtful/meaningful feedback... please don't take any of it personally... I try to tell people how to improve and always appreciate the same honesty in return... which reminds me - please return the favor and give a listen back.

i think your best choice is to get someone who is not a musician only a listener, musicians tend to critizize one as to hear what we would do, i always ask someone who isnt a musician and also yung people because its new to their ears, keep creating.

Fully aware of being at risk of turning your search for feedback into something less productive... I'll keep this short...
I dissagree... a musicians perspective is where you will get more 'usefull' feedback. If you just want to hear "you're great", then you're not looking for feedback - you're looking for fans.
Again, I liked where you were going with the rest of the song... and I mean that sincerely... but that gtr-synth riff at the front is off time... and not off time in a good way. It wrecks the things you have going for you in the song... again... this is just my 2 cents - take it for what it's worth. I mean no ill-will. And if I have the same issue in one of my songs I would hope someone would show the same honesty to me.
thanks
mv

so ends peacefully an almost feud