Bobby,
Fun stuff....Great song writing!
* Maybe not pan the guitars so far to the left and right. I have a great set of headphones, and it would be nice to have the two guitars "get together" a little more.
* Fear not the breaks...This is a personal one, but I think too many talented song writers carry the listener through Verse - Chorus - Verse - Chorus - Solo - Verse - Chorus (or something f the likes). If you "break it up" just a little in...say...the third verse, the listener has a chance to think "oh...something slightly different!"...and it compliments the song. Not a radical change, but an almost subliminal change.
* Sounds like you could use a bass player and a drummer. If the right heartbeat found it's way to your music, you'd be dangerously fun as hell to hear. Your worth finding some guys that want to have some fun and jam with.
Your songs beg for some simple harmonies!
Thanks for sharing, man! Great blessing to hear ya!
Fun stuff....Great song writing!
* Maybe not pan the guitars so far to the left and right. I have a great set of headphones, and it would be nice to have the two guitars "get together" a little more.
* Fear not the breaks...This is a personal one, but I think too many talented song writers carry the listener through Verse - Chorus - Verse - Chorus - Solo - Verse - Chorus (or something f the likes). If you "break it up" just a little in...say...the third verse, the listener has a chance to think "oh...something slightly different!"...and it compliments the song. Not a radical change, but an almost subliminal change.
* Sounds like you could use a bass player and a drummer. If the right heartbeat found it's way to your music, you'd be dangerously fun as hell to hear. Your worth finding some guys that want to have some fun and jam with.
Your songs beg for some simple harmonies!
Thanks for sharing, man! Great blessing to hear ya!