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Sentient you’ve already highlighted in your post the improvements that the song needs, normally when I listen to music on BandMix don’t pay much attention to the production aspect coz we all know there is always room for improvement, instead I concentrate on the composition of the song which reflects the ability of the song writer. You can right song man in spite of the title you are not crazy, I liked it.

Which Song is it Sentient please?

Um...Chippy? Look at the title of this thread.

SP, I think you are a little crazy, but I like your stuff. Wish the vox were up a tad more so I could get all the wordses.

I like the way you write around your voice, which is a pure & honest one, if not truly versatile & great. You have a style all your own, & a lot of us don't really have that yet.

A challenge for you -> write a blues, an emo, a bluegrass, or a '60's style pop song & record it. I bet you can, & can make it work, in your own style.

Wull yah, thanks Phil. Not on Sentients site. Didn't realize it was on his profile page. Thanks for making me look............

Um...Chippy? Look at the title of this thread.

Love it Sentient and I think that's #1 favorite that your composed so far. I like the little piggy singing thing as backup.

There was one guitar note that sounded off somewhere in the Chorus line. Not being picky at all really, it just sounded a little flat. (2nd guitar?)

I wish I could do what you do with midi.

Sentient Paradox, add "mix 1," "Mix 2," etc. - to the song title, and you'll never have to remember which copy is where.

Hey Sentient, I like your song. I think the delay in the end chorus is a little to much, I would adjust that a little untill the very last word and then leave it like it is, and I like your use of the stereo feild (panning) to prevent frequency masking, after doing a lot of studio work over the years I noticed early on how the really good engineers concentrate on this and how much it vary's depending on the song. Something that I am still trying to master. An engineer once told me "sometimes it's not a matter of turning the vocals up, but turning everything else down" typically I will leave the vocals 3 to 5 db above the instruments.

I like it!!

Sounds a lot better, I still think the vocals should stand out just a tad more.