ive been reading this forum for a while and see that there are some good musical opinions on here. ive been working on this project for a bit with a good friend of mine and we think we may be on to something. would love for some opinions. please check out my page and let me know what you think!
From what I can hear on this thing, you have some pretty good ideas, & can express them well.
It reminds me of the new wave stuff back in the '80's, but it's obviously an updated version. I like it, for the most part. I do have a couple of suggestions for the new guy.
Vocals need to be more up front, & it may be a touch over-produced, imho. Some of the keys' tones are too similar, but panning them farther apart might fix that, or simple EQ tweaking. There is a lot of stuff going on there, & it could be stripped down a touch without losing the feel of the pieces. You could emphasize the dymanics a bit more by dropping things out entirely in one or two places. It could use a bit more of an edge in spots, too, but that's all up to you, of course. I would love to produce your music.
Good vocals & harmonies. Interesting arrangements. Quite listenable & enjoyable.
I think you'd have a pretty specialized audience for your music, but that doesn't make it any better or worse. Thanks for posting it. You definitely have something going on. Keep it up. I'll be watching for more.