I POSTED IT ON MY PAGE.....CHEACK IT OUT IF I WILL
XhaDoW-6 wrote:I POSTED IT ON MY PAGE.....CHEACK IT OUT IF I WILL
Very nice job Xhadow. You are clean and precise damn excellent...
Now, a couple of things: Your intro was a tad lengthy and repetitive ..yet... and at the same time I envisioned an awsome opportunrty to express a galloping horse through a wasteland... The horse is there already... You need to layer in a description of the scythe holder himself (death) with bursts of banshee shreaking instrumentation on top of that horse... Death is swinging that bitch-blade like a madman...You gave us the verb part...now give us the noun...Give us that character in your story ..It all just within reach, man Go for it!








