CBoogie wrote:Hey everyone, first time posting here.
I'm having some serious difficulty writing songs.
Chris
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Okay I'll jump in too

wheeee!
Glen put it very succinctly about form: AAbA, AbAA, etc These are good to know. There are not too many hard and fast rules.
But I have found some things to consider: Within the frame work of 2- 3 minute ditties
1) Never try to write cryptic for the sake of cryptic unless your writing a song about cryptic. Many novice musicians get caught up in "technical effect" and often confuse that for dramatic effect. Truthfully, tech effect that should be the LAST thing on your list , when you compose a song. Hence , start your work on a piano or a guitar.
2) Meter, & Rythym tend to drive the disposition of lyrics. Lots of novice musicians tend to mis-appropriate song content. For example, could you imagine "Karma Police (Radio Head) " mashed up against "Hurt" (Trent Reznor or Johnny Cash's version) in theme?
3) Often, Many good poems are turned into mediocre songs... This is to say, lyrics are not poetry, necessarily. Because of this little fact, you can and should deviate/override from formal literary styles ...Its what makes your signature. (I believe) ...You won't find any Browning in Chuck Berry's "Go Johnny Go..."
4) Lyrics: Fun FUn FUN ...and did I mention fun. I have found it useful to attempt comedy in lyrics. You'd be amazed at how much drama and heart-wrenching resonation is born out of that. The point is to savor and have fun. You are telling a story... Savor it, indulge us with it.
Remember, Song Writing is a script of emotion and vibe. Above all... Its about entertainment (Even Bob Dylan, the master of word smithing and serious undertones gets that) ... If your song gets a shoe to tap, you're doing the right thing...
A bit of Trivia: It is my understanding that The 'craft' of songwriting has some of its roots in Middle ages, when travelrs, etc traveled from town to town and sang the news. Some of that news was no doubt pretty boring...so they had to figure a way to lift it ... (Also to soothe the listeners who may otherwise have reacted harshly to bad news)