General Music Chat

I like it.

Nice groove, good message.

Thanks.

I enjoyed it. For the style it is, it was executed perfectly. I have NO idea what's cool and what's not but I enjoyed it. It's not something that I would normally listen to but I wouldn't turn it off if it came on the radio.

What do you think is missing? It reminds me of some band from the '70's .... but I don't know thier name.

Good job SP. I'd like to hear a band do it.

Your voice fits the music just fine. As always great lyrics. Most every song of your I've listened to is very interesting and if you market them effectively I'm sure a major artist someday will want to record one or more. You're a fine songwriter...

I think that perhaps there should be a more staccato approach to the vocals, but it may require more syllables in the lyric, cuz it seems like the voice is dragging a little, though I know that it isn't. It would have more impact if it hit ya like a machine gun.

As far as what it's missing - some gut-wrenching guitar work would be nice.

Overall, Chris, I think Wasteland hits me much better, but this is a fine piece that deserves more work, after you've let it sit awhile, & come back to it with a fresh ear.

This song has a DEVO sound to my ears.
Your vocal sound is right for it though I would suggest you pepper
it up with a little more vocal activity. You need a band and studio.
Good job.

...... You need a band and studio.
Good job.

and less cheese

Listen later Sentient. Keep well.

and less cheese

That'll never happen Prevost. Cheese is an essential ingredient of my work.

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