Hey Cheaya.
No worries at all. thank you very much indeed.
Yes I'm looking at a lot of what you are saying at the moment. I'm not really a vocalist, so this is really new to me, sure I've hummed a thousand tunes and sang along, done some Karaoke and that kind of stuff, but never measured my own stuff with my voice.
Hahahaha I'm going to have trouble with staying away from my favorite genre and band. I doubt that will ever happen sadly. It really is where I live. I think other stuff I have will perhaps make that clear? What I'm doing is just getting all of this out really, its been years, too long. I want to get into a band again at some point, which would be just great. This first though because it screws situations up like that, if you've not done what you wanted to do I suppose.
Great advice by the way, Sure I'll try that.
Thanks very much indeed Cheaya
Chaeya wrote:Hey Chip, I hope you don't mind my two cents.
I like the essence of the song and the ambience. I like drum and bass and that genre. This song has such great potential.
But I don't like the drums. I don't think it fits with your vocal arrangement and sound, unless you use less words and draw them out more. I would direct you to Yello and how Dieter Meier uses his voice. It works.
I also would stay away from Phil Collins and seek something more original. That's just me.
I would start off with a slower more defined drum pattern then if you want to increase it later or at certain points, that would be interesting while still keeping the ambience. Try a lower, huskier tone of voice because it will fit better with the mystical, ambient sound you have going or play with some different sounds of your voice until you find something really unique. Think Leonard Cohen, but less depressing. I love when guys do that.
I listen to a lot of Delerium, Enigma and Yello.
I've posted the video to "Sitting on the Moon" by Enigma. I love this song because I listen to it while working on my novel. But you can listen to his voice. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctF_gAqQelE
I hope you don't mind, I'm not saying you should sound like them, but it's only for ideas.
Chaeya