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#119970 by gbheil
Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:37 pm
Nice groove. Not my thing but a nice groove.
Seems to me you could get yourself in a jam dropping all those trademark brand names my man. I'm no lawyer, but that light is blinking red in my head, if ya know what I mean.

#119974 by gbheil
Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:48 pm
Cool, probably right.

Like I said bro, sweet groove.
Best wishes.

#119979 by philbymon
Tue Aug 10, 2010 9:21 pm
This is a good example of the genre. The listing of all the products seems a little...I dunno...easy (?) to pull off, & thus, cheesy, to my ear. That's not to say that ppl won't like it. Good arrangement. Solid groove.

In the recording area, I'd like the vox just a touch more out front.

#119993 by Starfish Scott
Wed Aug 11, 2010 1:40 am
Marvin Gaye spliced with a touch of Stevie Wonder..

Break a leg..

#120395 by terryjovon
Fri Aug 13, 2010 1:09 pm
What can i say but yet another masterpiece...the ladies love it....when will we get to work together is the Question i have?

#120911 by Chaeya
Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:28 pm
I like the groove, but to go with the others, I'd write some different lyrics to it and call it something different mainly because MY TOOTH IS KILLING ME OVER HERE AND THANKS A LOT FOR REMINDING ME OF THE PAIN I'M IN, I CAN'T GET TO THE DENTIST UNTIL TOMORROW. OOOOOUCH!!!!

Chaeya

#120913 by Hayden King
Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:38 pm
Yeah I have to agree about the lyrics; I can't get by all o the branding. It sounds as if your trying to get attention from the corporations more than trying to express something. I'm not saying I believe that is your intent, just that the thought is drawn out by the lyrics.
There is profound profound, and simple profound in lyric delivery.. I don't get either from these.
Maybe find another way of saying what you are expressing.


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