Doubling your own vocals is so cool, ain't it? I LOVE doing that.
Reminds me of a lot of modern stuff, cuz there's not a really strong melody...it just wanders with the chords.
I like the lyrics, but you coulda made this a lot more melodic, even with this chord progression. I was hoping for a strong bridge, but, in the spirit of modern stuff, it wasn't there.
This song's perfectly okay, for what it is, but like JW says, it doesn't really grab me. It just kinda flows along without any real personality input from you, the singer. You took what could have been an A side, & made it a B side, imho.
SMILE - it's the safest way to spread your cheeks!