Music Industry Discussion

I humbly bow in your presence.

I would suggest from your song you have here to hire a singer, the guitars sound pretty good to me.

Good Luck and Keep On Rockin Dude

the more the merrier!

I think you need a singer.

Do not layer so hard you sound like an "echoplex" because it's not a viable sound for production.

"Play as much as you feel you have to, but not more".

That comes under "phrasing", no?

The music is congested imo.

Bow? whaaat? lol

Produce more, talk less.