Lol, critique this vocal cover/sample please

Hey board members, please listen to my cover (pure vocals no music, in other words a capella) of the song "Outside" by Staind. Ignore the video cause my camera is distorted and I wasn't trying to perform really, haha, (I know, if you watch me I don't look very confident, lol.) But yeah, anyways, please critique the cover I did. (Sorry it's just raw footage and I didn't do any retakes, just belted it out so the sound will get fuzzy sometimes (mic I'm using is a CAD u37 condensor mic and since my voice is kinda powerful it kinda messes up the sound with a lot of buzzing.)).
But yeah, I would appreciate any input, good or bad. *ready to be flamed*
Edit: crap, forgot to add the link, lol, it's a myspace video so . .
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=59327347
And yes, I am Asian but me no have accent.
But yeah, I would appreciate any input, good or bad. *ready to be flamed*

Edit: crap, forgot to add the link, lol, it's a myspace video so . .
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=59327347
And yes, I am Asian but me no have accent.
