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Okay. First off, thanks for doing this for me. I need a song about a CRAZY ass ex-girlfriend who is trying to let all her ex's about what they are missing out on. She is a red-head, country girl, and she wants them to know that they are missing out on the best thing ever. I need someone that will help me become a better song writer too.


Contact me at:
krazypixie_12@yahoo.com
or
sexxyskater_13@yahoo.com
or
tx_singer16@yahoo.com

Sarina wrote:Okay. First off, thanks for doing this for me. I need a song about a CRAZY ass ex-girlfriend who is trying to let all her ex's about what they are missing out on. She is a red-head, country girl, and she wants them to know that they are missing out on the best thing ever. I need someone that will help me become a better song writer too.


Contact me at:
krazypixie_12@yahoo.com
or
sexxyskater_13@yahoo.com
or
tx_singer16@yahoo.com

If you write the song, I'll critique it. Having someone write it for you is not going to make you a better song writer. Like everything in life, practice makes perfect.

Good luck

this is passing strange

Maybe Sarina likes someone here?

well sarina a lot of times when I come up with a set of lyrics that I try to remember, I'm no vocalist, and I rarely remember to write them down. I start with the title or a few defining lines and build up and around from there.

Didnt Mirand Lambert already write that song. Im not into country but I love that song.

All I can say is write write write, the more you practice this the easier it will get, thats the only way to get batter at anything is to keep on keepn on. Even if the song is a throwaway as most are it gets you into a writing groove.

Here's a link to a pretty good songwriting lesson:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RysJKIo8 ... annel_page

It's similar to the method I used when I was starting out. Nowadays I do things a little differently, but it's still basically the same. It's all about getting your thoughts out in the open first, then arranging them into Verses, choruses, and bridges. It works with any genre.

Hope this helps.

Song writing is so personal. Asking someone to write that song for you is only going to result in a bad song because it probably won't mean as much to them as it would to you.

Yeah, like everyone else has been saying, the best thing you can do is write it yourself. There are a lot of people here who'd be more than willing to give you tips along the way, but if someone does it for you, I don't think it would turn out the way you envisioned it.

jw123 wrote:Didnt Mirand Lambert already write that song. Im not into country but I love that song.

All I can say is write write write, the more you practice this the easier it will get, thats the only way to get batter at anything is to keep on keepn on. Even if the song is a throwaway as most are it gets you into a writing groove.

Thanks,
Yes she did. But I want to make one that is about what I have been through. That song sounds TO much like me.

Chippy wrote:Maybe Sarina likes someone here?

How so? I am confused.

Chris4Blues wrote:

Sarina wrote:Okay. First off, thanks for doing this for me. I need a song about a CRAZY ass ex-girlfriend who is trying to let all her ex's about what they are missing out on. She is a red-head, country girl, and she wants them to know that they are missing out on the best thing ever. I need someone that will help me become a better song writer too.


Contact me at:
krazypixie_12@yahoo.com
or
sexxyskater_13@yahoo.com
or
tx_singer16@yahoo.com

If you write the song, I'll critique it. Having someone write it for you is not going to make you a better song writer. Like everything in life, practice makes perfect.

Good luck

Thanks, I will post it on here and let you help me. i have some ideas but I am not sure they are any good.

Okay guys, here is a song that i wrote a long ass time ago about my ex that i think she needs to read.


You Will Never Be Me!!

V1: I see him holding you; I try not to loose my mind. He used to be mine, until you came along. I know you don't really want to be with him. You just want to get back at me for taking him back.

Pre C1: I only wish you knew, what he says to me about you. You can't do all the things that I can do. Try as you might, try to please him like I used to. You will Never Be Me!

C1: Girl, if you only knew what you do to him. He looks at me, the way he used to when we used to be. Oh, if you only knew how wrong you are if you think that you can ever be me.

V2: Think of all the good times, but don't think he doesn't know about all your little plans for him. He knows all about your scheme for revenge on me! He was mine, until you took him away from me.

Pre C2: I only wish you knew how much you hurt him, when you talk to that other guy. You will never be able to do the things that I can do. Try as you might, to please him like I used to. (Scream-O part -->) YOU WILL NEVER BE ME!!

C2: When you, get through, with him send him my way. He knows that my heart is his no matter what you do. So many times I hear him cry. I honestly can’t believe you would put him through that and make him cry as much as you do!!

What do I need to change on it?? I feel like there is something missing. I need to know what to change on it. I need HELP!!!

Thanks,
Tex
AKA
Krazy, Country Gurl....

I kinda like the scream part that says Youll Never Be Me, that might make a good chorus line if you wanted to bend it a little.

The idea is solid and coherent to me. I would have to hear it with emotion over music. Honestly if you have the right voice you can sing the phone book and make folks move.

Sounds like youve been burned, welcome to the club go to my player and listen Ive Been Shown, thats one of mine I threw together on a whim. Wrote it recorded it within a 3 hr stretch and havent listened to it since, just a moment in time. Not that its any good to anyone but me. I like to write songs when ever i get the whim just in case i get a jewel. As I said before just keeep working it. You may write the same song over and over again in different ways until you find the right combination. And just because youve written something dont be afraid to go back later and borrow and steal from it.

Good Luck

sounds like you need to put one of my rockin solos in between the c1s and c2s and maybe add the right changes. you got form together, but should it sound old school,mod alt, country, metal, or just plain old boring music?

topic may be too personal.You just cut out half your listening pop, if the music doesn't draw those awful men people in,you know the ones that can be stolen away. LYRICS ARE GOOD BUT THE music was hard to hear.