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comment welcome cristicism welcome
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:06 pmby Ethrea
in my darkness i can hear you
in my silence i can feel you
are you listening as im screaming
someone come to rescue me
did you ever think
you'd be the one who'd put me here
did you ever see
you were the one who left me to cry
in the end i guess what matters is
you and i were never meant to be
and my only solace is that i am better
than you could ever be
when all is said and done
i will be the one
who will come back to haunt you
when all the ties are gone
you will be the one.....crying
Posted:
Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:24 pmby Chippy
Hi Ethrea.
I think you should get one wicked blond hairstyle to jack up your image and start putting yourself about a bit musically.
Way back when this sort of lyric as has been said on another thread would have been a well known song by a well known singer so don't cut yourself short. (Not saying you have).
If you like that style then play with it some, even get someone just to play guitar with you and record on whatever. Someone here will more than likely help you post it somewhere so you have more chance of getting noticed too.
Like the Lyric. Best of luck with it.
Go Shocking Girl. (It works).
Posted:
Tue Apr 21, 2009 6:33 pmby Ethrea
ewwww blonde
lol i am actually working with a band right now and just sent this to one of the guys to work with and see what he comes up with
Posted:
Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:05 pmby Chippy
Well you could go green? Apparently its the major thing these days.
Ethrea wrote:ewwww blonde lol i am actually working with a band right now and just sent this to one of the guys to work with and see what he comes up with
Posted:
Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:10 pmby Ethrea
i actually just dyed it black the other day...was blue then red for alittle while. but of course corporate america demands "normal" hair colors and when job hunting my wild colors don't go over well.....
((
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:28 pmby PocketGroovesGSO
Wow! Dark, but really good. Does your band have music for this yet?
Posted:
Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:33 pmby Ethrea
i just sent it out to our keyboardist today
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:48 pmby philbymon
Good lyric with no rhyme scheme. Not too many songs like that that I hear. Interested in the music when it comes.
Good luck.
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 11:15 pmby Chippy
Hearing you.
Well good luck with it anywho.
Chippy signing out for the day and boy this has been a long one.
Ethrea wrote:ewwww blonde lol i am actually working with a band right now and just sent this to one of the guys to work with and see what he comes up with
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:30 amby ANGELSSHOTGUN
YA GOTTA POST IT SO WE CAN HEAR. MUSIC IS ALSO IMPORTANT TO A SONG. DA. Dont let CRIP see your hair as a blonde. He likes to make sure blondes have more fun.
Posted:
Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:45 pmby Ethrea
once i get it recorded i will post
Posted:
Wed Apr 22, 2009 6:31 pmby joewilk
Ethrea wrote:once i get it recorded i will post
Cool.
Your keyboardist knows your range, right?
Posted:
Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:37 pmby Ethrea
yep he does ^^
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 7:56 pmby Chippy
My range is a small stove, Cooker, Hob.
Mind its hot
Good luck Ethrea![/code]
Posted:
Wed Apr 22, 2009 10:30 pmby joewilk
Chippy wrote:My range is a small stove, Cooker, Hob.
Mind its hot
Good luck Ethrea![/code]
Don't get me started. I have a range that was still in warranty that took 39 days and 4 visits to get repaired. :irk: