philbymon wrote:Oh, stick yer neck back in...no worries, fret.
I didn't get all the words. Sounds kinda spacey-spooky for a holiday type of tune. Interesting approach to the entire idea, very unique, & I like it. Don't expect it to become the next Xmas classic, though. It just ain't that catchy.
Kinda preachy for me, but it's inherent in the idea, & I get it.
Yeah Philby I agree with your assessment that’s the very reason why I was reluctant to post the preaching lyrics don't work, the last thing I want do is preach in a song, but for this one for lack of imagination I ended up doing just that.
No is not going to be a Christmas carol for sure coz it has two strikes against it the somber feel and the lyrics.
I should have kept this one in the closet, it will be replaced soon with a more conventional tune maybe a cover to be safe.