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NEW TUNE UPLOADED PLZ CRITQUE'

PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 2:45 am
by The KIDD
Hey Gang,
"Home on the road" I wrote back in 93 about needin to get back on the road..This ones been a B to mix.The vocals are hot in the mix.Big diff between WAV and Mp3 too.??Anyway, just like some feed back on the arrangement really.Try to ignore that cheesy B3 for now cause I havent a clue what I wanna play yet, but I HAD TO PUT IT IN THERE.(gotta have B3.. :lol: )..Also, I know most on here may not like this genre BUT, Id like to have some lead gtr if anyone is interested in colabin..Kind of a clean strat with a hint of dist.

Thanks for listenin..
John

PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:46 pm
by The KIDD
For those who've already listened and thought MAN , that B3 is so crappy, I cant comment on that. :lol: .As of 8:45 am EDT FRI ..I put up another mix that should be alot better...

Thanks,
John

PostPosted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 1:09 pm
by philbymon
John, listening to it now. You have a good honest voice. Good harmonies. This is a very nice lil ditty. Excellent keyboard work, man! I agree - it needs a guitar lead. It's not real often that I listen to things I critique more than twice, but I feel like I have to. Nice little rhythms you gave going there - it's busy, nearly too much so, yet it's working for me on some level. I don't think the B3 is cheesy at all. I might even bring it up just a touch when you rerecord it.

I'll admit that it is a throwback style, but that's one of the things that makes it work so well. The lyric demnds it.

Well done. I like this a lot, & I'd listen to it a bunch, even though it isn't my usual preferred genre. Finish it & send it to me to put in my ipod, please.