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This is a song I wrote:

Expert on life

Try to define
The meaning of a lie
Don't be too scared or shy
To cross the line.
They're not what they seem
All those things you see.
Crack that shell and find
What lies inside.

It might take your breath away
Or it might leave you without a breath
Whether it holds good or bad
You'll have to find out for yourself.

(chorus)
Realize what you ahve to find.
Take that key and try to be an expert on life.
It's gonna take time
You'll learn after a while.
But it's worth it to try to be an expert on life.

Go ahead and fly
Search the clear blue skies.
But try to tame and guide
The wind you ride.
Find all the designs.
Of all the things in sight.
Wash away the lies
And feel alive.

It might be a pretty thing
Or it might be damaged throught and throught.
If ya wanna know thre truth,
Well, that's really all up to you.

(chorus)

(bridge)
Find out how to survive in this world.
When there'll be trouble, you'll know the code.
Clear out the rumors and stereotypes
Find out how to feel right.
And win every battle you fight.

(chorus)

Not bad.

On the refrain, instead of...

"Win every battle you fight"

How about...

"You don't have to win every battle you fight... to be an expert on life"

Maybe

Marie-A,

Nice lyrics there. Hmm, could use some touch ups, spelling mostly. I write poetry better than lyrics, but I can write lyrics as well. I have some, not that good though, Lol.

"As we pass through the light,
Gone astray into a darkened night,
All is lost but the star of our soul,
Gone as the Devil takes his toll."

By GuitarAnatomy ©2008

Kind of like that... Lol. But yeah, I am not sure about Craig's correction on that. It is a fairly lengthy lyric sheet, song would have to be a good length to substantiate that.

If you have any other lyrics please do post them, I would like to see them.

Peace out, GuitarAnatomy.

Guitaranatomy,

Thanx. I have some other lyrics I wrote, so I'll post them.

good job mari-a

good job marie-a