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"I Have a Dream Song"

Posted:
Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:33 pm
by )(Mr_^Payne)(
My Dream to make Music
The Music I Make Cannot be Heard, For No money to record
Only in trust in my words can you believe if im worth it
I will never post any audio on here, until it is copy written and Produced
For this reason many of you will turn me down
But if you would like to here a sample of my words
Then I shall make one up for you now
But if you try to steal them
Then I shall hunt you down
For too long eve waited, waited for an opportunity
To shine and be fated, to the endless lyres
Gone mad, braided my hair, wearing saggy jeans, fallen beneath me knee
Eve shed no tears, can reach my ears, and hear me as I pray, on faith....
So if you still decide him not good, then correct you are, for I represent my hood
Stars that are refugee to their own race
I am black, and blacken my heart is, eye for eye and nigh my heart beats
I will say... i will say, my name is Nathan K. Payne.....

Posted:
Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:02 pm
by Andragon
You have way too many dreams. One per forum, actually.
Stick to one forum, and post your thread there. Multiple copies of the same thread won't do you any good.
Re: "I Have a Dream Song"

Posted:
Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:33 am
by Black57
)(Mr_^Payne)( wrote:My Dream to make Music
The Music I Make Cannot be Heard, For No money to record
Only in trust in my words can you believe if im worth it
I will never post any audio on here, until it is copy written and Produced
For this reason many of you will turn me down
But if you would like to here a sample of my words
Then I shall make one up for you now
But if you try to steal them
Then I shall hunt you down
For too long eve waited, waited for an opportunity
To shine and be fated, to the endless lyres
Gone mad, braided my hair, wearing saggy jeans, fallen beneath me knee
Eve shed no tears, can reach my ears, and hear me as I pray, on faith....
So if you still decide him not good, then correct you are, for I represent my hood
Stars that are refugee to their own race
I am black, and blacken my heart is, eye for eye and nigh my heart beats
I will say... i will say, my name is Nathan K. Payne.....
You won't post music for copyright reasons, yet you post this quasi poem.I don't getit.

Posted:
Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:16 pm
by philbymon
Yep. This is the 5th post of this crud I've seen, & I can't stop dissing you, Nathan.
Have you noticed how rappers try so very hard to look SUCCUSSFUL? Do you even know anything at all about the genre you're trying to break into? Get some better rags. Write some good poetry, & learn how to deliver it. For heaven's sake stop your begging! "I have no money to record." HAH!
I can't believe you had the cojones to come to a musician's forum to beg for funding for this "dream" of yours, post this whiney lackluster "poem," & give excuses as to why you won't post any recordings. On 2nd thought, that required no true cojones at all, did it? Just a lack of self respect.
It's easy to pass up on self respect when you have nothing inside yourself to merit any respect, isn't it? Get up off your butt & DO something. If it's worthwhile, perhaps, if you're REAL lucky, someone will recognise you & offer to sponsor you, for a return on thier investment. You WILL have to pay them back, with interest, for anything they put into you.
There's no such thing as a free lunch, unless you're willing to give up everything you want so badly & go eat at the soup kitchen & live with the bums on the street.
Success is only acquired through hard work. Even beggars have to hone thier skills, Nathan. You're an amateur at that, too, ya little whiner.

Posted:
Fri Jun 13, 2008 1:24 am
by The Hunter
^
WOAH!!

Posted:
Fri Jun 13, 2008 11:15 am
by Crip2Nite
Uh-Oh....ya shoulda copy writed your little poem... I'm a-gonna steal it and put it to one of my screamo tunes!!!


Posted:
Fri Jun 13, 2008 12:12 pm
by philbymon
Careful, Crip! He's gonna "hunt you down" just as soon as he can beg for enough $ to afford that car & gun for the drive-by.
He looks like a tough gangsta-rappah to me.
In the meantime, I'd watch out for a guy on a stolen bicycle slashing at you with his mommy's steak knife, if I were you.

Posted:
Fri Jun 13, 2008 4:39 pm
by Starfish Scott
I wish I be could be sent back in time to assassinate the first rap and first rock/rap mixes.
(I'd need some grenades/explosives as well ) lol

Posted:
Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:41 pm
by Andragon
haha funny Phil.. take it easy, man. I think it was a joke.. a lil annoying, but it's a joke after all.

Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 1:07 am
by philbymon
Sorry, Andragon. I think my sun poisoning is gettin the better of me...been a rough week on me & I think I'm taking it out on everyone
When I saw him begging for sponsors it just set me off somehow
Dunno wassup with me this week...must be sumpin in da stars
I'm usually such a nice mellow bloke
I've been frustificatered for far too long
Maybe I need a good lay or something...it's been too long & I don't think it's been a very healthy lifestyle for me
At least I haven't gone off on anyone in r/t yet...but I feel it coming on on a daily basis...eeeeeeeeeeek!
Nothing I do is working for me right now, & I'm going outta my headbone - sorry folks...maybe I need some time away from it all...see you all later

Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:37 am
by koolmom78
lmao Uhh...philby...I think you're suffering from SRH...it's quite common really. No need to concern your self...just find a nice soft woman, release a little tension and you'll be your normal smart-a$$ self again

lol
Dude...Mr Payne sir...everyone here puts their souls out for each person to critique. It's how a musician grows in their art, so for another person to come accross as being too good for that can really set someone off. If you are truly interested in growing and learning and becoming better at what you do, you're gonna have to do what we all do...put yourself at risk.

Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 5:25 am
by Andragon
Phil, man, you're a nice and cool guy. And a groovster, so that's a bonus haha
Don't worry too much. Just have fun, laugh at idiots
within reason, and have a good time


Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 5:23 pm
by Starfish Scott
What's SRH? LMAO

Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:03 pm
by gbheil
We call it "white out " in the south.

Posted:
Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:53 pm
by koolmom78
SRH = Sperm Retention Headache
White Out??