Jahva wrote:I like it Mike...
You know how tempting it is to say what you would do different to someone else song... but I'll steer clear from that unless you want some discussion on it. Really just the lyric... although wouldn't have minded to hear an electric solo of some kind on the outro... your voice works well on this including your harmonies.
Thanks, yes the time for suggestions was back during the writing (pre-recording) stage. I posted lyrics on musesongwriters.com, and brought it to my monthly songwriter circle.