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New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 12:57 am
by GuitarMikeB
In a Pink Floyd-y vein. Still working on the mix, but its slowly coming together.

https://soundcloud.com/mikebirch/the-war-1-15-18

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2018 11:47 pm
by Bobby1256676
Hi Mike,
Sounds cool!
I like the chord progressions.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 1:56 pm
by schmedidiah
I like it but the harmonized vocals on the chorus are the sticking point again.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2018 10:55 pm
by GuitarMikeB
'again'? As in you don't like them, as in ....?

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2018 7:06 am
by schmedidiah
GuitarMikeB wrote:'again'? As in you don't like them, as in ....?

Yes. We've discussed this before. I'm not a fan of the harmonized vocals on the chorus of every one of your songs. Doesn't seem to serve this song at all. Just my 2ยข. Everything else was great.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2018 11:06 pm
by Lynard Dylan
Here goes, to me had a El Condor Pasa sound at the start but then it never let up thru the whole song, seems like you could get some release if the synthesizer picked up that rhythm guitar riff once or twice for a little variety. The lead guitar playing never left the minor scale, the trick is to make a few notes from the major scale sound good while you are playing in the minor position. The vocals sounded muffled, they need to brought up front more, good title but I couldn't hear the words to speak about the lyrics. And the drums just don't work get a drummer or a better drum machine. You asked that's my opinion I'd have to give it a 5 or 6.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2018 12:43 am
by MikeTalbot
Lynard

Hey stranger, how you doing?

Talbot

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2018 11:54 pm
by Lynard Dylan
Hey Talbot, good to see you still kicking around. Looks like this forum has dried up compared to its wilder days, guess we all are getting older, but I just keep getting better. I plan to haunt this forum every once in awhile, pretty busy these days, hope the world treats you fine.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2018 2:40 pm
by Planetguy
Lynard Dylan wrote: The vocals sounded muffled, they need to brought up front more, good title but I couldn't hear the words to speak about the lyrics.


That. 8)

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 2:57 am
by GuitarMikeB
Try this mix, lot of EQ work done since first mix:
https://soundcloud.com/mikebirch/the-war-1-24-18

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 12:57 pm
by schmedidiah
much better. I reposted it.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 1:38 pm
by GuitarMikeB
schmedidiah wrote:much better. I reposted it.


I saw you did that. Not really necessary, I post to SC only to get some ears on the mix (homerecording.com MP3 Clinic) and take the songs down after a while unless they are already published but not collecting royalties through CDBaby. Still too easy to 'steal' (i.e. record) music from SC.

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 5:13 pm
by schmedidiah
GuitarMikeB wrote:
schmedidiah wrote:much better. I reposted it.


I saw you did that. Not really necessary, I post to SC only to get some ears on the mix (homerecording.com MP3 Clinic) and take the songs down after a while unless they are already published but not collecting royalties through CDBaby. Still too easy to 'steal' (i.e. record) music from SC.

shall I un-repost it? :lol:

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 6:52 pm
by DainNobody
So we can also blame the Russians for operating pirate music venue sites for only the purpose of stealing music? Or are they also making Republicans out of us all? Knowing full well democrats are leading us into Godlessnrss and materialism? :evil:

Re: New song - - psychedelia

PostPosted: Wed Jan 24, 2018 7:13 pm
by Planetguy
Dayne Nobody IV wrote:So we can also blame the Russians for operating pirate music venue sites for only the purpose of stealing music? Or are they also making Republicans out of us all? Knowing full well democrats are leading us into Godlessnrss and materialism? :evil:


"materialism"????? isn't the usual line of BS that democrats are leading us into socialism and communism?

please pick one ridiculous theory and stick to it!