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What's up?

I'm Ella Maria, and I've recently published two of my very first singles. I would be very very delighted and I'd appreciate it a lot if I could see what you guys think about them. Please take a look, listen and comment, anything!

Hand in Hand:
https://youtu.be/ZwTM1WpHYlE

Without You:
https://youtu.be/0ShPm_QyieQ

I've written both of my songs completely by myself, but they have been produced in Canada.

Cheers! Ella Maria

I'm an old man for what my comments are worth...
The songs are decent or as good as most pop schtuff I unintentionally hear...
Not crazy about the video... I get it you shot most of it with a phone stick which is also common these days.
The images don't flow very well and then you go back to the place with the kittens like you ran out of ideas or footage.
The outdoors shots in the black dress seem better suited for your complexion...

I may be reaching a bit but your second tune was too familiar to the melody of Queens Don't stop me now... at least in parts. Maybe you never heard it before it's kind of an old tune from the 70's...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HgzGwKw ... enOfficial

Good luck to you...

Has some good production value. Not necessarily my cup of tea, but it's pretty perfect for what it is. Keep it up!

my willie wrote:I would say you suck, but I can't confirm that from the audio so I'm indifferent at the current moment and the jury is still out on weather or not you suck. I need more time to properly review the audio and other sources you may be in contact with and form a opinion based on the facts and not ones just gleened from merely listing to your song. I need more concrete evidence to say with any percentage of certainty wether or not you do indeed suck.

indifferently yours

my willie

And those type of replies, troll, are why you will end up getting banned again.

Ellamaria, feel free to ignore the troll, the rest of us try to!

Very well produced audio, not my 'type' of music, either. The video with cats was obviously recorded on a phone (it has that fish-eye all-inclusive look to it). It's fine to show those 'human' parts of your life in a video - for PART of it - but having the whole video done that way makes it very 'high school'.