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Been hanging out at Muse's Muse songwriting forum a lot, get great early feedback on lyrics and song structure.

The Thunder Moon - rocking song (with a message)
Never Ever - pop schmaltz (my wife likes it)

Thunder moon is a great song nice harmonies and very nice arrangement.
Never Ever sounds more like a folk song with a pop vocal. Nice song and arrangement the vocals are a little pitchy. I would re-do the lead vocal trying to stay on pitch. JMO for what its worth.