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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 12:12 pm
by GuitarMikeB
I'm at work so can't check out your demo, but you should include 'hidden' contact information on your profile - only premium members can message you here, most people who browse the profiles are not paying members.

PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 1:45 pm
by jimmydanger
Lindsay, first off you should not cover a cover if you can help it. It's a Cure song, not an Adele song. Go listen to the original track and then try to sing it like you, not Adele. I would like to her your voice on a more upbeat song, that song's too much of a downer and really doesn't highlight your vocals. Best of luck.

PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:10 pm
by gbheil
Welcome.

I like your voice, but I don't feel this demo is doing you any justice.

I don't feel as I hear emotion, just you, singing a cover.

The recorded mix is killing you.

The vox are way too far out front IMO.

And the result sounds like your trying to restrain your voice to fit the backing track.

I feel you can, and should, produce a much better demo.

Something that displays your talent.


Best wishes.

PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 5:38 pm
by GuitarMikeB
lindsaylyne wrote:Thanks! Anyone who can't post shoot me an email to lindsaylyne@hotmail.comvand let me know your thoughts.


You need to put your email address in yoru profile - and hide it like 'lindsay AT hotmail DOT com' - unless you are a premium member, the site owners will delete unhidden contact info when they come across it.
In general, people are not coming to these forums at all to seek out others.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 1:33 am
by Jahva
I didn't really dig that too much. None of the interesting musical elements are there. It's not a lounge song. That's not on you... Adele shouldn't of done this song imo. I'd stay away from it. I did listen to her version... again no offense to you but it sucks to my ears.
I don't imagine it was much of a challenge for you either... Do your own thing.
Good luck to you.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 11:48 am
by Jahva
lindsaylyne wrote:Joined a rock band tonight. Will work on The Cure's and my own version and repost later. Thanks guys!


8)

PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 12:30 pm
by jimmydanger
Fantastic! You have a good attitude and I'm sure you'll do fine. Keep us posted.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 8:20 pm
by gbheil
Now that's what I'm talkin about ! 8)