That's a great hook riff. Good parts. Good arrangement. Needs a vocal. The overall product is still a little loose. Specifically the drums. I know how hard that can be. Are you playing to a click? That can really REALLY help tighten things up when you aren't playing with a drummer. Dude, your solo is tasteful! Love this one. My favorite song you've posted. Sweet outro with the big rest! Way to go man!
Merry Christmas Sean! Thanks for posting! Hey Check out my Christmas tune I posted when you get a chance.
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