My New Original!
The first song on my player Katie! My new Child! Thanks to my most beautiful wife for helping me with the mix! I love you Dawn! A special thanks to my niece! God bless you! I was able to post "my version" of Europa! enjoy! 
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J-HALEY wrote:At work now listening through different speakers. Crap the volume is too low. Not sure why that is. I did everythinbg by the book! I could tell during the mixdown the levels were a little low. During the mastering process it brings the volume levels down even lower damn!
GuitarMikeB wrote:I'll listen from home. WHen you 'master' it, the volume should be brought up to 'commercial' level (without squawshing it with too much compression.
Did you use a mastering preset on that recorder? That might be the problem. If you don't have any software to boost the volume, I can do it for you, it only takes a few minutes - send me a link to download the WAV file from someplace like Soundcloud, dropbox, etc. mikebirchmusic AT yahoo DOT com
jimmydanger wrote:Sounds good Jeff but yeah the levels are very low. The mix is a little funky too, the acoustic is louder and has more presence than the lead guitar. But it's fine for a demo.
J-HALEY wrote:The first song on my player Katie! My new Child! Thanks to my most beautiful wife for helping me with the mix! I love you Dawn! A special thanks to my niece! God bless you! I was able to post "my version" of Europa! enjoy!
J-HALEY wrote:The first song on my player Katie! My new Child! Thanks to my most beautiful wife for helping me with the mix! I love you Dawn! A special thanks to my niece! God bless you! I was able to post "my version" of Europa! enjoy!
Stringdancer wrote:J-HALEY wrote:The first song on my player Katie! My new Child! Thanks to my most beautiful wife for helping me with the mix! I love you Dawn! A special thanks to my niece! God bless you! I was able to post "my version" of Europa! enjoy!
Knock, knock… may I come in?
Oh boy JH is going to go ballistic on me anyway here I go with my 2 cents.
First off congrats for your technical skill, unfortunately you’re victim of dreadful disease afflicting millions of solo guitar players who get trapped in showing off their skill at the expanse of a good riff, a melody or a hook thus resulting in a failure to deliver.
With a song title like Katie and the beautiful time signature you’ve chosen, one expects a bit more substance in way of a melody thus giving it more meaning; instead I hear a constant solo filled with fingers calisthenics followed by sound stunts.
Don’t get wrong calisthenics and stunts are nice but not throughout the entire song IMO. Finding the proper balance between the two can make the difference between and average song from a great one.
My advice would be for you to smoke a fat joint, get inspired and come up with a nice melody that Katie can actually hum or whistle since there are no lyrics, then re- record the song starting it with the main motif or melody followed by the calisthenics and stunts and finally ending it with a tasty ending.
Off to the shelter!!!