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Posted:
Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:40 pm
by Jahva
I like the ideas your working. Nice minimalistic approach. Whether by design or default i like it.
I can hear some of your influences coming through a little Doors, REM, Talking heads.
You have a unique style as a vocalist but i think your songs would be better served with a real singer. jmo.

Posted:
Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:53 pm
by gbheil
I also like the direction your headed.
Good clean classic vibe.

Posted:
Sat Aug 11, 2012 3:39 pm
by PaperDog
I Agree with Jahva... Tho I will add you vocal has a distinct signature...just need to develop it. (Focus on clarity of articulation, ennunce the prose, more)
Your lyrics are clever, and interesting...
Good job.

Posted:
Sat Aug 11, 2012 8:11 pm
by Jahva
obeythepenguin wrote:Jahva wrote:You have a unique style as a vocalist but i think your songs would be better served with a real singer. jmo.
My band has a real singer, but since we're still short a guitarist and drummer, we've only gotten so far with practices... so my scratch takes are all we have to go on until we've got a complete line-up. I'll admit I don't have the most beautiful voice, but I'll take "unique" 
I'm glad you didn't take offense to my comment. It wasn't meant to be a rip... and PD made a good point... it's not something you couldn't develop in time. I still suck at vocals but I've gotten better by listening to some of the advice here.
Good Luck with your project.

Posted:
Sun Aug 12, 2012 12:45 pm
by GuitarMikeB
Keep rockin', and looking for a drummer!

Posted:
Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:55 pm
by Planetguy
quirky stuff! and that's a compliment....i likes me that quirky stuff.
you didn't ask my advice but i'll toss it out there anyway. i can't sing a lick so i'm not gonna take shots at anyone else's vcls buuuut.....you might wanna pay some more attention to rhythm/timing/phrasing when it comes to vcls.
and a little 'verb and/or some light delay makes even the best singers sound better.
cool tunes, mr. penguin!

Posted:
Mon Aug 13, 2012 3:46 pm
by VinnyViolin
Cool songs, some good lyrics!
Maybe draw out longer notes on more of the syllables.