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New Song- Paperdog

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:18 am
by PaperDog
Just a practice session.

"Mr. Corn Rose" with Lyrics posted

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:29 am
by JCP61
serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:36 am
by RGMixProject
I really liked the music but the lyrics I'm kind of up in the air. When the music started I was really expecting some good deep down romance gone good. You have a message but its just not what I listen to.

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:36 am
by Starfish Scott
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


>?

I liked it.

It's true I would have liked to see more guitar activity, but it's definitely good.

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:41 am
by PaperDog
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


Not sure what yo mean...Please be more specific
Thanks

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:46 am
by PaperDog
RGMixProject wrote:I really liked the music but the lyrics I'm kind of up in the air. When the music started I was really expecting some good deep down romance gone good. You have a message but its just not what I listen to.


Thanks RG

Very interesting take on the song. (It was not my intent to make it romantic ...but now I can see where one could have taken it that direction.)

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:47 am
by JCP61
PaperDog wrote:
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


Not sure what yo mean...Please be more specific
Thanks


It's not my song to explain, please, by all means.

you wanted a reaction, I have given it.

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:54 am
by ANGELSSHOTGUN
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


What the ffuck you talkin' bout man. I love it when some one turns a social commentary into a racial attack. I've been there 40 years ago. I don't know where you get off thinking racism doesn't cut both ways.

To set the record straight none of it is good.

I think Dawg was just righting a song about my last sentence!

Good writing , playing , and generally just getting better .

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:56 am
by PaperDog
JCP61 wrote:
PaperDog wrote:
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


Not sure what yo mean...Please be more specific
Thanks


It's not my song to explain, please, by all means.

you wanted a reaction, I have given it.


Well Thanks for the reaction... I have no clue what you're talking about...

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:06 am
by JCP61
you guys are funny...
:D

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:12 am
by PaperDog
GLEN J wrote:
JCP61 wrote:serious waste of guitar

cartoon black people,
what a shame.
:shock:


What the ffuck you talkin' bout man. I love it when some one turns a social commentary into a racial attack. I've been there 40 years ago. I don't know where you get off thinking racism doesn't cut both ways.

To set the record straight none of it is good.

I think Dawg was just righting a song about my last sentence!

Good writing , playing , and generally just getting better .


Glen, You nailed it Bro... The song stems from a newscast I saw during the Obama Election campaign... They had this militant guy (some fringe group supported by guys like Sharpton, Farrikan, etc,,) and he was outright yelling 'death to white folks.'..'kill their babies...' on the news. And he went on and on... It was laughable...but I also saw he was so angry it was painful... I actually felt bad for the guy...
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The song is really about compassion ... (not singling out any particular race, though I admit the Urban tone in the song might suggest otherwise. ) Just offering viable solution to certain social dilemma...

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:20 am
by t-Roy and The Smoking Section
Loved the music. The lyrics seem provocative but if you're being honest....I guess thats honorable.

But then the next song, Homemade Remedies, came on. Sounds very George Harrison-ish to me. "Feeding Pigeons" is Beatlesque also. So is this a band now? Or is this the recording you wanted to make but couldn't find a bass player?


Sounds really good man! Mazal tov (Congratulations)

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:22 am
by PaperDog
I should have said this before... The song is not deemed finished. The last 120 seconds is actually to be replaced... I have a slam poet coming in to fill in the blanks..during that span. (The guitar work there is lacking, for want of selective underscoring ... but will probably make better sense with the prose on top... ) Sorry folks.. I should have explain this better... :D 8)
But thanks for listening to what I got...

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:24 am
by PaperDog
yod wrote:Loved the music. The lyrics seem provocative but if you're being honest....I guess thats honorable.

But then the next song, Homemade Remedies, came on. Sounds very George Harrison-ish to me. "Feeding Pigeons" is Beatlesque also. So is this a band now? Or is this the recording you wanted to make but couldn't find a bass player?


Sounds really good man! Mazal tov (Congratulations)


LOL! Thanks YOD, We are a band of two right now...with guest features to help along (when they dont wuss out... LOL!)

PostPosted: Sun Mar 18, 2012 1:26 am
by ANGELSSHOTGUN
Cool DAWG (I know, I know, DOG) ....

You keep getting better every time I hear you. Thanks for sharing. 8) :)