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I pulled some old stuff and added new.
Hope you like it.\would like to hear back.

Songs 2 and 3 Not the cover:

I am only sayin' this just to be on the picky side of things. Yea, sure the songs are not perfect but still damm good.

I don't know alot about country, ...not that I'm any kind of expert...but it sounds more americana folk/rock to me...kinda like the bastard love-child of Steve Forbert and Brian Wilson!

Guitar sounds very bright to me, with not a huge amount of bottom end.

I'd like to hear the verse melody developed a little more, but my main feeling about the tunes is that the chorus sounds more like a pre-chorus to me...I kept expecting a big major chord hooky chorus to come in after that.

Both songs got the makings of an excellent tune, the achingly wistful voice and the general listenability, but I reckon the addition of a chorus, or maybe just a bridge section in the middle with a different chord structure, could help take the songs a notch higher.

Wow that was great feed back.
I'll work on that.

Thanks for posting music.

The Beatles cover lacked the dynamic changes of the original and thus seemed to just drag on.

I also have to wonder about the guitar tone. Is this an amp, or a processor of some variety. Seemed to lack depth especially in the lower register.

Read somewhere about your being " retired " ??

Would that be from a day job, or ( God forbid ) from music ?

May be an odd comment but the voice does not " sound " 62 years young.

Greatly appreciate your taking time to post music for my enjoyment.

I like your clean guitar style 2468. Is that a soundcard?
Anyway, I like it.