I'd like to hear some comments on this one.
It hits my ear almost like a Motown thing, yet the content is rather incongruous. It's like it's at odds with the genre. The basic idea works, yet the use of more...hop-hoppish?...language either ruins it, or makes it.
Is this a work of comedy? A mere novelty song? Or can it stand as an actual song? I think it's certainly catchy enough.
It has the classic structure of the 60's soul hit, save the rather abrupt ending. I think it should have either faded out, or come 'round full circle to the simple piano intro.
Your thoughts?