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Nice groove. Not my thing but a nice groove.
Seems to me you could get yourself in a jam dropping all those trademark brand names my man. I'm no lawyer, but that light is blinking red in my head, if ya know what I mean.

Cool, probably right.

Like I said bro, sweet groove.
Best wishes.

SAMOOOOOTH!

Nice stuff bassmandre. puts me in mind o the man, Marvin Gaye.


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This is a good example of the genre. The listing of all the products seems a little...I dunno...easy (?) to pull off, & thus, cheesy, to my ear. That's not to say that ppl won't like it. Good arrangement. Solid groove.

In the recording area, I'd like the vox just a touch more out front.

Marvin Gaye spliced with a touch of Stevie Wonder..

Break a leg..

What can i say but yet another masterpiece...the ladies love it....when will we get to work together is the Question i have?

I like the groove, but to go with the others, I'd write some different lyrics to it and call it something different mainly because MY TOOTH IS KILLING ME OVER HERE AND THANKS A LOT FOR REMINDING ME OF THE PAIN I'M IN, I CAN'T GET TO THE DENTIST UNTIL TOMORROW. OOOOOUCH!!!!

Chaeya

Yeah I have to agree about the lyrics; I can't get by all o the branding. It sounds as if your trying to get attention from the corporations more than trying to express something. I'm not saying I believe that is your intent, just that the thought is drawn out by the lyrics.
There is profound profound, and simple profound in lyric delivery.. I don't get either from these.
Maybe find another way of saying what you are expressing.


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