It's a nice groove-ballad, and I think it's good. I think it could benefit from a little better arrangement, but as a songwriter too, that may just be me, and what my take would be. I think your voice could be better on a few parts. Maybe just a little firmer or stronger in places.
I liked it though.
Good job!
But you're talented as a songwriter and singer, so we EXPECT alot from you!
Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:43 am
by KLUGMO
This was purely a B side filler song in concept. Even used a cheaper studio with lesser players. I will work harder in the future.
Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 1:49 pm
by 90 dB
I really liked that one.
Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:12 pm
by philbymon
It's an okay B side, for sure. It just doesn't grab me, though. I much prefer most of your other stuff.