Guitars - out of tune: NOT. Perfect tuning, may be vocals.
OK I'll take your word for it, you tuned it after all...but I still hear intonation problems. Are you fretting hard enough to pull strings sharp? Action high enough to do the same?
Hopefully it's not the dreaded ...OH NO...dead strings? For the first time in years I actually played a set of strings until one popped tuning down last night. I was starting to hear intonation problems with it and knew they needed to be changed, just kept putting it off. Tried to tune down to open G last night and the high E popped...it now has that new set of strings...
Something is off and I'm not the only one who noticed it, I suppose it could be dissonance interacting with vocals in places but a couple of places where I only hear guitar like 0:50 or so I hear something slightly out of tune. No vocals there to cause issues. That's why I'm wondering if you're fretting too hard, one of my worst habits. I think you can hear a bit of it if you listen to "Silhouette of A Daydream" on my profile, and there's one place I actually have to pull a string a bit because it comes out flat if I don't. I can't remember if I pulled it enough on that track, it might be out too.
I have a friend who has an old Martin with action so high I can't play the thing, he keeps trying to get me to tune it. I picked it up a few days ago, listened to it, didn't touch a thing, it was still in tune from the last time I tuned it, but soon as he tried to play a chord it was way out...action way too high (I've told him that a dozen times and he won't let me set it) and intonation goes out the window soon as you fret a string or three. I've found that to be a common problem with acoustics, even though I really don't see you with action that high...but it is a possibility so I have to mention it.
Overall I think it's a good song, has potential. It stayed in my head for an hour the other day when I listened to it the first time, that means either it's a keeper or it's so horrible it sticks anyway...like some of Madonna's or Cyndi Lauper's songs...and I don't think that's the case.
I'm not trying to "dis" the singer by the way, just an observation. She's doing well for a beginner, and you're probably right, the power and confidence will probably come with practice. From what I hear she has very little pitch control problems, I didn't hear anything noticeable enough to mention on the first or second listens. That's a lot better than the girl I heard onstage a couple of weeks ago, she was just plain bad...couldn't carry a tune if you put handles on it...
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