Hey Gang,
As of SAT. 10am EDT, Im seeing and hearing your tunes on your page Gittergal???...Were they gone and now they're back.?.Did you add them back?...Yeah , Ive seen posts where someone is saying that their avatar is gone (not visible), But I see it???... Been here 2 yrs I personally have never had any probs ...ANYWAY, thought I add ailttle critique...
I like your tunes GG but IMO, the keys are too low for you...Try the first one in F# or even Gm...Try the 2nd one in Dm...Why did your choose Cm?...Yeah , the line in the vrs during the Fm to the low Cm resolve note , your practically talking the words. Kinda loses its melodic structure.I bet both tunes will have more life (emotion) and flow better in higher keys...
KIDD
As of SAT. 10am EDT, Im seeing and hearing your tunes on your page Gittergal???...Were they gone and now they're back.?.Did you add them back?...Yeah , Ive seen posts where someone is saying that their avatar is gone (not visible), But I see it???... Been here 2 yrs I personally have never had any probs ...ANYWAY, thought I add ailttle critique...
I like your tunes GG but IMO, the keys are too low for you...Try the first one in F# or even Gm...Try the 2nd one in Dm...Why did your choose Cm?...Yeah , the line in the vrs during the Fm to the low Cm resolve note , your practically talking the words. Kinda loses its melodic structure.I bet both tunes will have more life (emotion) and flow better in higher keys...
KIDD




